IoT-Aware Architecture to Guarantee Safety of Maintenance Operators in Industrial Plants
, Ilaria Sergi 1, Ilaria Stefanizzi 1, Luca Landi 2, Luciano Di Donato 3 and Luigi Patrono 1,*Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments of Manuscript ID: asi-2303721 entitled: ‘IoT-Aware Architecture to Guarantee Safety of Maintenance Operators in Industrial Plants’
Ø In the introduction section, it would be better if the authors give the importance of the study first and then compare with what other researchers have done/do. Starting lines to be rewritten/realigned. Introduction may also be reduced to 600-700 words.
Ø ‘best of our knowledge’ may be replaced with synonyms.
Ø At some places, manuscript requires improvement in English language like Lines 212-213; Lines 306-307; Lines 554-556.
Ø Lines 154-156: problems and solutions may be mentioned with adequate references for better clarity as in lines 191-209.
Ø Lines 481-483 may be reframed for clarity.
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Reviewer 2 Report
In my opinion, after reading the paper, it looks interesting. However, The following questions should be discussed.
It is sufficient to define the purpose and scope of the study. Different studies on this topic are available before. What is the difference from the others? It must be emphasized.
In Section 1. Introduction, relevant research progress needs to be summarized more comprehensively. In addition, contributions need to be listed at the end of the introduction which could be friendly to the readers.
The information provided in Table 1 seems confusing.
It is not sufficient to explain the results in Table.
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Reviewer 3 Report
An interesting, comprehensive, informative applied technology Article.
The "best" Article Reviewed in several years.
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