Body Checking and Body Image Avoidance as Partial Mediators of the Relationship between Internalized Weight Bias and Body Dissatisfaction
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Discussion
The discussion section is very weak.
I suggest that references used in the introduction should not be repeated in the discussion unless very necessary. Line 192-197
In the second paragraph of the discussion no reference.
Again in the third paragraph line 216, and 219 previous references used in intro are repeated.
Again in the next paragraph references are the same as in the introduction. Line 220-232
The last paragraph of the discussion has only one reference.
This study has not discussed results with sufficient and relevant literature.
Discussion results with sufficient and fresh literature. Don’t use studies that are in the introduction section.
discussion is an important section and weakness like this is unacceptable
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Reviewer 2 Report
This is a very well-written paper and my feedback is limited. Here are my comments:
--How were the demographic variables used in the analyses other than descriptives?
--The research questions in section 2.3 read as causal.
--Why did you only use the total score of the BCQ?
--The use of BMI contributes to a culture of fat phobia and weight stigma. Thus, it is concerning to me that a paper investigating weight stigma would utilize the BMI at all. It is my suggestion to eliminate it altogether.
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Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
Accepted; authors tried to improve the revisions.
