This section answers the three research questions and specifically reports the analysis of types and frequency of EFL teacher feedback and the factors influencing feedback decision-making that emerged from the data in this study.
4.1. Types of EFL Teacher Feedback
In response to the first research question, the results show that there are in total six different types of teacher feedback that indicate the distinctive features of feedback delivered by the case instructor, namely, negotiated feedback, content feedback, task feedback, informational feedback, affective feedback, and learning strategy feedback (see
Table 2 for detailed taxonomy).
4.1.1. Negotiated Feedback
Negotiated feedback refers to teacher’s negotiation with students in which attention focuses on resolving a communication problem as compared to negotiation that simply aims to correct learners’ errors.
Example 1 |
(After Ellen’s mispronunciation of unit in her presentation) |
T: | By the way, when you pronounce unit, sometimes you pronounce it as [ˈju:nɪt], but sometimes you pronounce as [ju:ˈnɪt]. [ˈju:nɪt], it’s different from unique [ju:ˈnɪk]. [ˈju:nɪt]. |
S1: | [ˈju:nɪt]. |
T: | Yeah. |
Drawing on van Lier’s [
41] terminological dichotomy of conversational and didactic repair, one may distinguish between two functions of teacher negotiated feedback, both of which have a role to play in foreign language classrooms: a conversational function and a didactic function. The didactic function of teacher negotiation involves what we consider to be ‘negotiation of form’, namely, the provision of feedback that encourages self-repair involving accuracy and precision and not merely comprehensibility, which is in line with the notion of comprehensible output [
29]. With respect to the conversational function of negotiated feedback, it involves negotiation of meaning, characterized as an exchange between learners and their interlocutors as they attempt to resolve communication breakdowns and to work toward mutual comprehension [
42].
4.1.2. Content Feedback
Content feedback is mainly concerned with the content introduced by language learners in their presentations or written assignments. Most often, content feedback is presented in the form of a question, either seeking confirmation from the presenting students, seeking understanding from the listening students, or eliciting answers from them.
Example 2 |
T: | FromS2, when was Scott Fitzgerald born? Very specific date. |
Ss: | 1890, 1896…ninety…(ninety?) six…(discussing) |
T: | S2, do you remember? |
S2: | 1896. |
Content feedback can be divided into display content feedback and referential content feedback. Specifically, display content feedback refers to teacher’s questioning feedback to elicit answers that directly come from the materials presented in class, aiming to ensure that the participating students have captured the content showed by their peer presenters. Referential content feedback means to discuss the subject matter or information that is not contained or revealed in students’ presentation, intending to elicit information from the presenters or other participating students. Answering this feedback involves learners seeking further information relative to their interests and often in relation to their task-related activities.
4.1.3. Task Feedback
Task feedback indicates to the students either the main process that they need for understanding and conducting tasks, or how well they have perceived or performed tasks [
3]. As revealed by the data, task feedback can be further divided into three subcategories, that is, commentary feedback, directional feedback, and extra task feedback.
Example 3 |
T: | First, I would like to say a few words about my impression of your first assignment …it is a fairly good writing. Fairly good, I say, fairly good is not extremely good, because there a few mistakes, many mistakes, mistakes abound. There are many and, ah, some very big problems. However, generally speaking, I think you already have a very good start. |
This is a feedback type that is related to both the process (e.g., “You can choose to read a wide range of topics or to read extensively on one particular theme.”) and the product (e.g., “You have all done a wonderful job,” or “Very good hosting, and timekeeping, and presentation, questioning and answering and so on.”) of students’ task performance.
4.1.4. Informational Feedback
Informational feedback delivers message that is seemingly irrelevant to language learning and task performance, but necessarily important for the learners to develop their interests and change their behavior.
Example 4 |
T: | World culture is an important part of our learning. Festivals, together with their historical accounts and contemporary celebrations, are part of our world knowledge to be sought and acquired. |
It has already been noted that the information presented in teacher feedback can be of great value to enhance student’s learning, especially when the message is relevant to their previous knowledge and compatible with their expectancy. In this study, informational feedback mainly expresses the teacher’s ideas and thoughts, and contains information that is mainly related to learners’ interest development and personal development.
4.1.5. Affective Feedback
Affective feedback refers to teacher’s personal affect and evaluations about learners, which is usually positively directed to the learner’s self.
Affective feedback not only shows teacher’s recognition of individual learners for their kind help and hard work, but also expresses his thanks to the whole class for their work and participation. More importantly, it shows teacher’s respect for the students as equal participating members of the course. According to Hattie and Timerpley [
3], affective feedback can assist learning if it can lead to “changes in students’ effort, engagement, or feelings of efficacy in relation to the learning or to the strategies they use when attempting to understand tasks”. Based on the focus of teacher’s affective feedback on students, four different functions of affective feedback are distinguished, including evaluation, motivation, expectation, and appreciation. These four functions often interact with each other, and sometimes it is not easy to make a clear distinction between them.
Example 5 |
T: | I can tell your love for the detective and for those movies and TV shows has benefited your English learning. I believe, after watching and reading and thinking and researching, you’ll be a real Holmes expert, with an ever-increasing IQ, and imagination and grace. |
4.1.6. Learning Strategy Feedback
Learning strategy feedback addresses the ways and methods that students can use to monitor, direct, and manage their actions when learning languages and performing tasks. It intends to produce students who love learning and know how to make their learning efficient and effective. It mainly covers three aspects of strategy: principles of language learning, skill acquisition strategy, and self-management strategy.
Example 6 |
T: | I understand you want to write correct sentences, but you need to know that over-reliance on simple structures in your writing will not elevate your expression. So, try to combine some sentences into one and try to express some complex/multiple ideas in one sentence; at least do it as a language exercise. |
4.3. Factors Influencing EFL Teacher Feedback Decision-Making
Four categories of factors were identified to affect teachers’ decision-making and criteria use when giving feedback in a learner-centered EFL context. They are teacher-related factors, learner-related factors, task-related factors, and learning context-related factors.
4.3.1. Feedback-Provider Factors
In terms of feedback-provider factors, the case instructor cited different factors to explain his moment-to-moment decisions, including belief of teacher feedback, learning experience, time and energy constraint, and teacher belief of language teaching and learning. Some instances of feedback-provider factors can be seen in the following extracts:
The feedback can act as a director to guide the learning process, and its usefulness is closely related to its content. Just like the washback effect of language testing, the feedback is likely to function as a guideline.
(Extract 1)
By providing feedback, I want to get the students to know, ah, he may realize that there has never been a teacher writing so much feedback for me…I want to leave an impression in the following ways. First, the teacher has done what he has promised. Second, the teacher has done it carefully rather than casually. The students will think, ‘the teacher has been so careful, so I have no reason not to study hard’. I hope it can be a stimulus to them. This is why I think it is worthy of the time taken to do it. Because, if the teacher can call the students into action, then he will no longer need to do much work. And the students will find pleasure in their learning.
(Extract 2)
As these two excerpts reveal, the case instructor expressed his belief of the importance of feedback to show teacher’s respect and concern for the participating students and their hard work. It seems that the instructor considers caring about students’ work as one of the most basic components of teacher feedback. Closely related to the belief about this caring role of feedback is his belief that feedback will be able to motivate students to work harder and put more effort into their own learning, especially when feedback is provided in a timely and appropriate way in response to students’ specific tasks and individualized personalities. Meanwhile, the teacher also expressed that on the one hand, providing feedback is a commitment made in the learning contract. So, he thought he should take the responsibility to give the feedback and set an example for the learners to keep their promises. On the other hand, he hoped that the feedback would motivate students to shoulder more responsibility for their own work. In the T’s opinion, once the students were triggered to take action in their learning and development, they would find pleasure in their work, and the teacher would no longer need to do as much work.
4.3.2. Learner-Related Factors
Learner-related factors have played an important role in the instructor’s consideration of giving feedback. As will be seen below, the instructor reported that the following factors affected his decision-making in the delivery of feedback in interactive IEL course: learner expectation, the threat of avoiding policy, individualization, learner performance, and encouraging policy.
The importance attached to feedback is partially attributable to expectations from the participating students, who, the case instructor thinks, desire to receive some message and information with respect to their learning and performance. Unlike the traditional EFL language classrooms in which the teacher plays a dominant role in governing the pace of learning and monitoring learners’ performance, IEL stresses the central role of language learners who are expected to take control of every step of their own learning and development. However, at the same time, the instructor pointed out that the students still expected to receive some comments as long as the teacher appeared in class; therefore, there should be some feedback in class, as acknowledged by him in the following excerpt:
I think there should be some feedback in class. When the teacher stays in the class, the students desire to receive some message and information from him. For Chinese EFL learners, they think teacher instruction should be highlighted in language learning classrooms. In IEL, though the teacher intends not to play a leading role, the students still expect to get comments and feedback as long as the teacher stays in the class. (laughs) So, there should be some feedback.
(Extract 3)
Additionally, individualization is another factor he would consider when making a decision in response to students’ learning and performance. Viewed in this light, the individual learner factors such as gender, learning anxiety, and aptitude seem to have affected teacher’s decision-making in delivering feedback. Given the limited time available for the instructor to become familiar with the students, it is that found most of the feedback related to the individual differences factor are concerned with learners’ interest development. From the case instructor’s point of view, individualization is one of the fundamental factors he would take into consideration when giving feedback, as illustrated by the following excerpts:
Because I am not so familiar with the students. But concerning the individual factors, I will take them into consideration. That is, to be specific, to be individualized is one of the fundamental considerations. Uh, regarding his interest and its content, and his learning plan, job expectations, there will be some feedback. For the individual learner, uh, there will be some feedback based on his learning and performance. This is also in line with their individualization.
(Extract 4)
Firstly, I think individualized feedback would be better, although the suggestions are not made under the condition that I know their interests well. What I consider at first is I should not give the same suggestions. If I do that, it seems I am repeating something. I don’t want to make the students feel like that. Secondly, actually, I have got a lot of things to say with regard to reading. You see that, for example, I hope they can communicate with each other and share many things related to their common interests.
(Extract 5)
The above excerpts indicate that individualization is one important factor that the case instructor would take into account when giving feedback to the individual language learners in IEL. Closely related to the case instructor’s belief of individualization is his expectations that students could interact with each other with regard to the feedback they have received from the teacher. From the case instructor’s point of view, there might be many ways to develop an interest. Individualized feedback, in his words, makes it possible for students to learn from each other. For example, if learner A thinks the teacher’s suggestion is not suitable for her, she may have a look at the teacher’s advice to learner B, and follow it. Similarly, learner B can also follow learner A’s way of learning if she think it is more suitable for her. In this sense, it may be safe to infer that heterogeneous individualized feedback, on one hand, reflects T’s opinions concerning students’ different interests and their individualized personalities, and on the other hand, it also indicates T’s opinions with respect to students’ individualized learning, performance, and development.
4.3.3. Task-Related Factors
The types of tasks have also influenced the teacher’s decision-making and criterion use when giving feedback. There was more feedback at the beginning stage, but less feedback at the later stage, which might possibly account for the inconsistency of amount of feedback across lessons. When asked about the reasons for pointing out the problems related to the method of presentation, T mentioned:
Uh, for example, in the lesson plan, there are some requirements for presentations, some requirements for the content related to their language learning, alright? And it’s also required that they should talk about difficult problems that come from their interest development, but, ah, few of them have mentioned it. I know it well when I give the feedback. Uh, as for the way they present, it’s clear there aren’t enough materials related to their language learning, though they have presented some examples, such as making some annotations. And it’s still not sufficient. However, for their difficult problems, no one has talked about it. I think I should point it out.
(Extract 6)
The above excerpt indicates that the instructor seems to have taken task requirements into consideration when deciding to give feedback. For example, at the beginning stage, the students had just embarked on their journey to develop their interests, so more attention was paid to their interest development and task performance rather than on the forms of language. Closely associated with the types of tasks was T’s concern that too much feedback, in particular, too much feedback on language errors, might reduce opportunities for students to make links between forms and functions. Furthermore, T was worried that too much negotiated feedback might risk breaking the flow of communication in classroom. Therefore, T rejected obsessive concern with error correction for fear of that it might break the flow of the course, as shown in the following excerpts:
I realized that there is not too much correction on language errors. As far as I am concerned, it might interrupt the flow of the course. When giving feedback, I will take classroom activities into consideration…That is to say, should I give feedback after all the presentations? Or should I just give it one by one? If I give feedback one by one, it might interrupt the flow of the course and split it into pieces of activities. I hope the course could flow smoothly. So it is related to the arrangement of the activities. It will make a difference to the decision-making. Sometimes, it is also a dilemma.
(Extract 7)
I feel I have attached much weight on the affective aspect. Make the students feel the teacher has great expectations on them to develop their interests. I hope they can agree with me with regard to their interest development. For this teacher, or for the sake of his patience, his advice and encouragement, they will try to elevate their interests to the largest extent. So in my opinion, the feedback is mainly concerned with their emotions and feelings.
(Extract 8)
The above excerpts show that T has realized the shortage of negotiated feedback. At the same time, he also acknowledged a certain dilemma in this regard: on one hand, if he does not correct errors, opportunities for students to make links between form and function are reduced; if he does correct errors, he is worried about risking interrupting the flow of communication. It is worth noting that giving feedback, according to the instructor, means more than hunting for mistakes and correcting the speech and writing of language learners. It also means informing students about their progress and instructing and guiding them to make improvement on areas relative to the tasks and activities they are engaging in.
4.3.4. Learning Context Factors
The learning context factors have proved to have a high impact on the teacher’s decision-making in giving feedback in theinteractive IEL classroom. This section addresses learning context factors by describing the impact of the teacher–student relationship, classroom activities, and learning task types on the teacher’s decision-making in delivering feedback in response to students’ learning and performance in the present study.
Given the belief in an equal teacher–student relationship in interactive IEL classes, T mentioned that he was a participant like the other non-presenting students who are learning from the presenters. Therefore, teacher feedback, according to him, is just a loop in the chain of teacher–student interaction, which, in turn, belongs to the flow of communication between all participating members of the class, including the teacher, the students, and the teaching assistants, as illustrated in the following excerpt:
I hope you can further explain the teacher–student relationship in IEL. Why do you put the student as a central agent, and the teacher, to put it in the same way, as another central agent......First among equals. This is what I have considered. everyone is equal in the class. As for their interests, the learners may know more and better than me. But among all the members, everyone is equal in the class. I see myself as one of the members. I am a learner as well. When the presenters show their interests in front of the class, I’m learning and trying to understand the presentation.
(Extract 9)
The above excerpt indicates that T appeared to take himself as one of the equal participating members in the classroom, and was therefore more disposed to see himself as a learner who was trying to learn from the presenting students with regard to their interests. In view of the above quote, it may be possible to say the equal relationship, to some extent, can account for the large number of teacher content feedback, in particular, the one related to learners’ interests, such as ‘How long does an alpaca live?’, ‘What is the national flower of Japan?’. Most often, content feedback is presented in the question form, either seeking explanation from the presenters, seeking understanding or eliciting answers from the non-presenter.
In the meanwhile, it is worth mentioning that classroom activities have played a part in influencing teachers’ focus in decision-making and the extent of their criteria use as well. For example, the instructor once stated that the increasing questioning and answering activity between students reduces the amount of time available for providing feedback, as illustrated by the following excerpts from the interview:
Last class, the technical problem had taken too much time. And after Leo’s and Michael’s presentations, there had been many questions. Oh, for Melody’s presentation, the students had asked many questions as well. They had run out of the time ……
(Extract 10)
Actually, Melody has made a very innovative presentation. But I don’t have time to show my appreciation. I am prepared to write down some words in the next feedback, or I will give my feedback next lesson.
(Extract 11)
There is only limited time in class, and any delay in class activities will reduce the time available for the teacher to give feedback. Under such circumstance, the teacher will have to find a balance between maintaining learner agency and maximizing teacher feedback. That is to say, on the one hand, a central role is endowed on the students, and it is their jobs to be host, presenter, time-keeper, and also to be question-raiser and responder. On the other hand, it is expected the teacher can help the students to take charge of their own learning to a large extent. Usually, teacher feedback is delivered after all the presenters have finished their presentations. So, any delay caused by students’ activities might reduce the time available for the instructor to provide feedback. Therefore, it is worth noting that under the circumstance that the host invited the teacher to give comment after each presentation, it may be possible there would be more feedback provided for that lesson.